So I’m re-reading the posted chapters of Because You Left, sort of getting myself into the groove before I start seriously working on Part Three, and I came across something that got me so super-excited that I have to share.
(This is, in an odd way, spoilery for BYL, because I’m obviously highlighting it for a reason. Also, yes I’m bragging on my own writing, ‘cause I write good sometimes and this is one of those times.)
in bathtubs full of
Charles Bukowski (via bittersweetsongs)
Wow bukowski so profound do you also bathe fully clothed you dickhead. “Oohh isn’t it funny that a person will eat when they’re hungry but will duck if you throw an apple at their face”
Anonymous asked: I just read your story "That Which Isn't Yours" and wanted to tell you that I think it's fantastic. The pacing and characterization are excellent. Shaw is not a robot, but she's not quite "wired right" either, and I felt Root's frustration with one of the few limitations of The Machine (no matter how much information she has about/on Shaw, she will never ever actually get inside her - or any human being's - head). Thank you! Great stuff!
Thank you, anon!
Anonymous asked: What state do you live in?